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Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Great pic, the snow in the background really brings out your eyes.
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 6
The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 6: An equal balance of two worlds. The carriage was only used on special occasions. Which meant, Patch, the Greenly family's old ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: A Smile, and the World Stops Breathing
Wow-o-wow! I love how this started and how it ended. Usually I don't like short poems but this was great. You made this seem so surreal but then it ended ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Remember the time?
Well I haven't seen you around here, so you must be new. Welcome to YWS I must say that this is a wonderful piece and I have never seen a ...
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: I Am Awake
Thanks so much 200397. Yeah I was really inpired when I seen this picture. The message is really important and when you need to quote me, go ahead. Thanks again ...
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: I Am Awake
Note: This is for Kylan's contest and I admit that I just wrote it but I like it. As always, I'm open to criticism and advice. So enjoy!!! Oh and ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {five}
Hey Ky, Well I didn't know you posted a part five! Ok I'm here now. This was an amazing chapter and really, you're so awesome that this doesn't really need ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: Cauliflower and Hand Grenades
Wow! I never would've thought anybody would actually like this-it was just something I thought up for Cal's contest. I do think that this ended abruptly, so I'll work on ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: On a new journey...
Congrats! All of your hardwork has paid off! Is your book in like any popular bookstores-Borders...Barnes & Noble because if so, I'll be sure to check it out. Congrats again ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {four}
Thanks for letting me know that the next part was posted Kylan!! Wow!! Words can't even describe how great this is. I mean they should make your writing apart of ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {three}
I really didn't mean to wait so long to read the rest of this but I finished reading this and I loved it!! Charlie doesn't cease to amaze me, he's ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {three}
Hey Kylan!! I read half of this and what you have so far is great. I'll be back to give you a full critique later, I promise but I gotta ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: NaNo Planning 2008
I really want to do NaNo this year. It'll be my first time. I've been up night and day, day and night thinking of an idea until I found one. ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: The Conundrum Of Happiness
Hello, Welcome to YWS!! First I must say that you write exceptionally well for your age. You made me see things that went far beyond John's life and then more. ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: The Orb of Confucius (1)
Hey Sam!!! I love Shuqaio and Akshay together. They fit like two mix-matched socks in a sea full of matches. Perfect! He’d played with her bracelet and absentmindedly muttered something ...
Sep 2, 2008
